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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Monday, November 5, 2018
How lettuce Grows - Explanation Writing
Reflection:
In this activity, we were learning to write a explanation on how to grow lettuces. I used the word 'then' for my time connector but when my class gave me some feedback, I changed the then's into other time connectors. Next time I should make the time connectors more interesting and more different.
Wednesday, September 26, 2018
My Bird - Exaggeration Poem
Reflection
WALT write an exaggeration poem. I learnt about hyperboles.
Thursday, September 20, 2018
Going to Jupiter - narrative poem
Reflection:
WALT write a narrative poem.
I learnt what 'narrative' meant and I enjoyed writing this poem.
Next time I need to make the introduction more exiting and add some more similes and some more alliteration.
Wednesday, June 20, 2018
Friday, June 1, 2018
How to Make a Healthy Silverbeet Dip
WALT plan events and use topic words for an explanation.
Friday, May 25, 2018
Haiku Poem
Reflection
WALT write a haiku poem.
I found tricky to do the middle line because I didn't know what color ladybug to choose. I found easy to do the first and last lines because I already know what to write.
WALT write a haiku poem.
I found tricky to do the middle line because I didn't know what color ladybug to choose. I found easy to do the first and last lines because I already know what to write.
Thursday, May 17, 2018
A Moment in Time
Reflection
WALT use strategies to make our writing more interesting.
I need to improve on making my ideas more interesting and putting more onomatopoeia's in.
It was easy to get the onomatopoeia because I knew what a bomb sounds like.
Friday, April 13, 2018
Fire Man Daniel saves the day!
Reflection WALT use interesting words and senses.
I need to improve on adding my senses.
I found it really tricky to add my interesting words in because I didn't know much interesting words.
Friday, February 16, 2018
Bio Poem
We were learning to write a bio poem.
It was tricky to choose the word because I had lots of ideas.
Wednesday, November 29, 2017
Greenhouse
Last week on Monday, we made greenhouses. The first thing we did was drawing a square tracing a square. Then we gave it to Miss Lister and she cut it out (the middle square). After that we drew two lines for the roof. Miss Lister also cut the roof out. Next we decorated it. We only can draw veggies and flowers and then we drew greenhouses and our names. Then Miss Lister gave us a plastic bag and Miss Lister also gave us a paper towel. Then we rolled up the paper towel and Miss Lister wet it. Then Miss Lister gave us four wet cotton balls. Lastly she gave us six beans and we put them in too.
Wednesday, November 22, 2017
plurals with nouns
We are learning to make words with es.
If you have x, z, ch, sh, o, s, in the end of a word you can add es.
Wednesday, November 15, 2017
Youth town
Yesterday we went to Youth town. We were learning speed and agility. The first thing we learned was a ladder and you need to tiptoe over it. The next thing we learnt was the hurdles. We need to bunny hop over them. The next one was the agility poles. You need to zigzag through it. Then we did it all together. It was quite easy at the start (witch is the ladder and hurdles) but the agility poles was hard. Then we played cat and mouse. The cat needs to catch the mouse . The mouse runs straight and the cat runs tilted.
Thursday, November 2, 2017
Wednesday, August 30, 2017
Friday, August 18, 2017
Thursday, August 10, 2017
The "oo" sound
It was easy to put the words in the correct boxes because you just need to match the letters with the right word.
Paler is fishing
I was learning to write a narrative story
It was easy to write the introduction.
It was hard to do the complication because there is lots of problems I could use and I did not know what problem to use.
Wednesday, August 9, 2017
Thursday, August 3, 2017
Use speech marks
It was easy to find where the start speech mark goes and the end one.
It was hard to put the speech marks in the right place on the top because the square was covering on the letter.
Wednesday, August 2, 2017
Find 'er' words
It was easy to find the 'er' words.
It was tricky to do the right words because the end of words are the same sound of 'er' and not 'uh'.
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